C/A fic

Apr. 30th, 2006 01:19 am
[personal profile] fuzma
The one inspired by the C/A phone icon I am using right now.



Title: Untitled 3
Pairing: Adam Green/Carl Barât
Genre: RPS
Rating: Who really cares?
Author's notes: Okay, as I said this was inspired by my icon. And some stuff over at [livejournal.com profile] daily_adam
Warnings: Spell-check still on strike. All mistakes my own. This is more or less ONLY dialogue. I wanted to change that but I have been staring at this thing for nearly a week now and in a way I think I would ruin it if I add more to it than mainly the dialogue. Only a little bit of prose at the beginning and two ickle occurences in the middle. But that's it. It is really just dialogue. Written in about 10 minutes. So bare with me ;)
Disclaimer: I do not own Carl and/or Adam. If I would, they would be shagging like mad right now!


It’s the middle of a photo shoot when Adam’s cell phone starts to jingle loudly in his pocket. He sends an apologetic glance to the photographer who in turn just waves him off with a “That’s okay, I was just about to suggest a short break anyway.” and leaves the room.
Adam gets his phone out, smiles when he sees the name of his boyfriend blinking happily away in tune to the jingling on the screen.
“Hôla amigo! How’s Mexico treating you?”
“Mexico itself is treating me very well. Jet lag on the other hand is killing me. You in Germany already or are you still using my flat as a free hotel room?”
“No, I am not living off your ass anymore. I flew down to Munich this morning. Living in an actual hotel room now with a much better service than what you have been giving me. You know, room service and all.”
“Hey, I am pretty sure that room service doesn’t include morning blow jobs and helping you take a bath?! How can that be better than my service?”
“Yeah, you are right about that. But the last few days it was lonely without you in there. So, I am quite happy I am on the go again and have some things to do.”
“I could always give you something to do, love. So … tell me pumpkin, what are you wearing?” Adam can practically see Carl grinning through the phone.
“Pumpkin?! Please tell me you are joking?!”
“Why?” Voice all innocent. “What’s wrong with it? I like it. Anyway, would you please focus? What are you wearing?”
“Seriously, Carlos. Can’t you talk to someone on the phone without trying to start a round of phone sex?”
“I can talk to lots of people on the phone without starting phone sex just not when I am talking with you. So? Come on, just telll me already?”
“Actually I am wearing my white shirt, you know the one you find so extremely boring and tried to rip apart last week, the blue jacket, the ugly brown shoes and your jeans.”
“I KNEW IT! I was sure I didn’t leave them at your place like you told me. You little thief. I love those jeans, you know they are my favourite pair. And the ugly brown shoes? They don’t go with anything.”
“Why did you make me buy them then?”
“I must have been temporarily insane that day. Anyway, I want my jeans back. I am missing those jeans.”
“Awww, poor Carlos. I am afraid you have to wait till you come back from Mexico though. I cannot beam them over.”
“No, but you could get out of them, so we can get this thing started.”
“Carl, I am not getting out of my jeans … “
”MY JEANS!”
“Yes, sorry YOUR jeans … anyway, I am not getting out of them now as I am in the middle of a photoshoot and I am pretty sure the photographer would be slightly disturbed if he came back in with me standing here with my ... your jeans down my ankles.”
“Awww, you are no fun sometimes. I am sure I would be finished with you before he comes back – I am just that talented in working you up.”
“Sure, Carl. But I think I have to refuse that lovely offer anyway, he is coming back just now. How about you call later again. I should be back in my hotel room in about two hours!?”
“I guess I have no other choice then. Just so you know though, I am going to the beach with the boys now, all shirtless and will be glistening from the sun in no time. Little beads of sweat on my skin, you know how you would love to lick those away. Then I’ll go for a swim and come out all wet and … “
“Stop it! Please.”
“Hah, see I told you I get you worked up in no time.”
“I never said you couldn’t. Just call me back in two hours, yeah?”
“Yeah, love you, pumpkin.”
“God, that is gonna stick, yes? And ditto! Bye.”

Date: 2006-04-29 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marystmatthew.livejournal.com
Just wanted to say I haven't read it yet, but as my eyes flew over the page I caught the part that goes "MY JEANS!" and now I have a serious giggle fit. AH.

Date: 2006-04-30 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ronsoftie.livejournal.com
You just knew I would use this in a fic one day *g*

Date: 2006-05-01 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marystmatthew.livejournal.com
I did. I hoped.

Date: 2006-04-29 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marystmatthew.livejournal.com
Okay, this is so my favourite one. It's incredibly lovely and sweet and funny, and the level of closeness and bantering and smiling and just comfortableness with each other is breathtaking. And, of course, I've always been a sucker for playful banter. And phone sex.

Will go through after I've read it again!

Date: 2006-04-30 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ronsoftie.livejournal.com
Ohmy. *blush* I always like my fics much more after I have read what you say about them. And yeah, I think it really was good I just left it as it is without trying to break up the dialogue with unecessary "Adam said"'s or "Carlos laugh"'s etc.

LOL, I only just now realized I mixed up two pictures of Adam in my description of what he was wearing. Heh. Not that it is important for the fic but that just came to me.

I love playful banter so much as well. Glad it came around. I seriously just typed this thing up without thinking about it all that much. Maybe that actually made it work :)

And phone sex.
Carl is trying again and again, isn't he? He will also be trying in the fic which is a bitch to be written. *g* Maybe one of these days it will happen ... we'll see. I mean it will happen - and it happened already - I just haven't written it down yet ;)

Will save your last comment till tomorrow. Bed now. Zzzzzzzzzzzz ...

Thank you so much :)

Date: 2006-05-01 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marystmatthew.livejournal.com
*blows kiss*

And yeah, I think it really was good I just left it as it is without trying to break up the dialogue with unecessary "Adam said"'s or "Carlos laugh"'s etc.
And very right you did. It flows so well.

Glad it came around. I seriously just typed this thing up without thinking about it all that much. Maybe that actually made it work :)
It usually does. Too much thinking ruins a fic, methinks. This is perfect :)

Poor Carlos. Especially because I am so sure Adam is an absolute ace at dirty pretty talk.

Date: 2006-04-30 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marystmatthew.livejournal.com
blinking happily away in tune to the jingling on the screen
Just want to point out that I love this phrasing :)

Hôla amigo! How’s Mexico treating you?
... and I totally hear Adam's voice on this.

Hey, I am pretty sure that room service doesn’t include morning blow jobs and helping you take a bath?!
At least that's what he HOPES...

Meh. Poor Carlos must get all jealous when they're away from each other so long. For some reason I can see him getting much more possessive than Adam. Probably wrong, but... Well.

I could always give you something to do, love. So … tell me pumpkin, what are you wearing?” Adam can practically see Carl grinning through the phone.
GAHAHAHAAAAA!!! &hearts

Pumpkin?! You must be joking?!
EEP!! Please no Davy trademark sentences *recoils*

Why?”, voice all innocent.
As if.

Anyway, would you please focus? What are you wearing?
Right, Adam. Losing track of the important things like that. Tssk.

you know the one you find so extremely boring and tried to rip apart last week
Aww. I'm sure that was totally unselfish.

You little thief.
*gasps* Insults turn me on. Like woah.

And the ugly brown shoes? They don’t go with anything.”
“Why did you make me buy them then?”
“I must have been temporarily insane that day.

I love this so much!! It's so random. It's so REAL!!

Anyway, I want my jeans back. I am missing those jeans.
Poor Carlos, missing his jeeeaaaans *pets him* Aww.

No. but you could get out of them, so we can get this thing started.”
“Carl, I am not getting out of my jeans … “
”MY JEANS!”
“Yes, sorry YOUR jeans …

ROTFLMAO!!!

I am not getting out of them now as I am in the middle of a photoshoot and I am pretty sure the photographer would be slightly disturbed if he came back in with me standing here with my jeans down my ankles.
... or maybe not.

Awww, you are no fun sometimes.
*snerks*

Sure, Carl.
Yeah, Carlos. Right.

Just so you know though, I am going to the beach with the boys now, all shirtless and will be glistening from the sun in no time. Little beads of sweat on my skin, you know how you would love to lick those away. Then I’ll go for a swim and come out all wet and …
Grrrrrch!! That got ME all worked up....

Yeah, love you, pumpkin.”
“God, that is gonna stick, yes? And ditto! Bye.

SQUEE!! Cutest ever!!

Seriously. You are such a shiny darling little thing *loves you lots*

Date: 2006-04-30 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ronsoftie.livejournal.com
At least that's what he HOPES...
Nope, he totally KNOWS ;)

So far I haven't really thought about anyone of them being overly possessive about the other. I just think that both know there is no need for any jealousy and/or possessiveness. However, it could always happen ... :)

EEP!! Please no Davy trademark sentences *recoils*

LoL! Sorry, but that is the expression. Not my fault. And how happy am I that I did not think of Davy at all when I wrote it? I am healed :) I changed it for you anyway :P

Right, Adam. Losing track of the important things like that. Tssk.
But never fear, Carlos is near to lead him on the right track again. I love how matter of fact Adam is when he finally tells him what he is wearing ... cause he knows exactly he is not getting out of those right now.

Aww. I'm sure that was totally unselfish.
Poor Carl, he really *does* hate that shirt ;) And now Adam is wearing that thing paired up with his beloved jeans. It's a crime.

I love this so much!! It's so random. It's so REAL!!
Awwwww. *yay* Thank you :)

Grrrrrch!! That got ME all worked up....

Carlos takes pride in that ;)

*blush* Thank you, love :) ♥



Date: 2006-05-01 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marystmatthew.livejournal.com
So far I haven't really thought about anyone of them being overly possessive about the other. I just think that both know there is no need for any jealousy and/or possessiveness. However, it could always happen ... :)
Uuuuuh, plot bunny!! No wonder I never get any fic done, I'm way too busy with feeding all the bunnies... But oh, sex as territory marking! Wow!

I changed it for you anyway :P
Thank you so very much *exhales*

But never fear, Carlos is near to lead him on the right track again. I love how matter of fact Adam is when he finally tells him what he is wearing ... cause he knows exactly he is not getting out of those right now.
*evil cackle*

Love you :)

Date: 2006-04-30 07:49 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] persikay
Aww, that was lovely. I thought the dialogue part flowed really well.
Carl's pumpkin comment made me laugh a lot.

Date: 2006-04-30 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ronsoftie.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I am glad it flowed really well. I think I would have really ruined that flow if I added more to it as I had planned.

*g* Carl calling Adam pumpkin is from one comment over at the comm when we were trying to make a caption for the pic in the icon :)

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