fuzma

*blows kiss*

And yeah, I think it really was good I just left it as it is without trying to break up the dialogue with unecessary "Adam said"'s or "Carlos laugh"'s etc.
And very right you did. It flows so well.

Glad it came around. I seriously just typed this thing up without thinking about it all that much. Maybe that actually made it work :)
It usually does. Too much thinking ruins a fic, methinks. This is perfect :)

Poor Carlos. Especially because I am so sure Adam is an absolute ace at dirty pretty talk.