Ohmy. *blush* I always like my fics much more after I have read what you say about them. And yeah, I think it really was good I just left it as it is without trying to break up the dialogue with unecessary "Adam said"'s or "Carlos laugh"'s etc.
LOL, I only just now realized I mixed up two pictures of Adam in my description of what he was wearing. Heh. Not that it is important for the fic but that just came to me.
I love playful banter so much as well. Glad it came around. I seriously just typed this thing up without thinking about it all that much. Maybe that actually made it work :)
And phone sex. Carl is trying again and again, isn't he? He will also be trying in the fic which is a bitch to be written. *g* Maybe one of these days it will happen ... we'll see. I mean it will happen - and it happened already - I just haven't written it down yet ;)
Will save your last comment till tomorrow. Bed now. Zzzzzzzzzzzz ...
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LOL, I only just now realized I mixed up two pictures of Adam in my description of what he was wearing. Heh. Not that it is important for the fic but that just came to me.
I love playful banter so much as well. Glad it came around. I seriously just typed this thing up without thinking about it all that much. Maybe that actually made it work :)
And phone sex.
Carl is trying again and again, isn't he? He will also be trying in the fic which is a bitch to be written. *g* Maybe one of these days it will happen ... we'll see. I mean it will happen - and it happened already - I just haven't written it down yet ;)
Will save your last comment till tomorrow. Bed now. Zzzzzzzzzzzz ...
Thank you so much :)